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[Robjenko]

[Robjenko]

(22-01-2015 01:27 PM)Robjenko Wrote:  

2 done what you think people am I on the right track

[Diche]

(23-01-2015 07:28 PM)Robjenko Wrote:  Please give me feedback
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Your story on the second image is a little difficult to read, try a different font, maybe something like Ariel. Other than that I think they look really good.

[Robjenko]

I've edited the font but it wont upload 

[Robjenko]

smokers by robert2497@btinternet.com, on Flickr

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facebook head 2 by robert2497@btinternet.com, on Flickr

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smoke forum 2 by robert2497@btinternet.com, on Flickr

[Michael]

I really like them. I think the white outline around the words could be a bit thinner, as it is, it sort of detracts from the words themselves in my opinion. And on the last one, where it says "Have you considered a Electronic Cigarette, but are uncertain because of the lack of information???" the font runs together a bit making it harder to read. The rest looks great

[Don]

My take.

Guy Fawkes! Where are you when your people need you?

[Robjenko]

(23-01-2015 09:28 PM)Michael Wrote:  I really like them. I think the white outline around the words could be a bit thinner, as it is, it sort of detracts from the words themselves in my opinion. And on the last one, where it says "Have you considered a Electronic Cigarette, but are uncertain because of the lack of information???" the font runs together a bit making it harder to read. The rest looks great

Nice one Michael.. how about if I change the font

[Robjenko]

40 years nf by robert2497@btinternet.com, on Flickr

new outline

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smoker new font by robert2497@btinternet.com, on Flickr

new font.. does that flow better

[Michael]

Yes that definitely is better  I might move the cigarette on that last one, since it's current position makes it look like either "I" or "!" since it's at the end of the word and interrupts the flow of the sentence. Perhaps move it to the far left instead?